the frost of momentum defining outreach of time ad nauseum

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mtmynd
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the frost of momentum defining outreach of time ad nauseum

Post by mtmynd » April 26th, 2005, 8:26 pm

the phantasmagoria
split the ethers -
red sees the flip
side of slaughter
beef of wholly knights
succumbing to valley's
paradisiacal fountains
(sprayed metallic)

gold digging interiority
collapsing within
the circumference
of 180 eyes defying
gravitational axis
spun into escape ropes
for caligula's 7th dream

satisfying remorse
over faint meadows
divining ancient pasts
thumping in delirium
like hearts of clubs
pounding desiccated
flesh of man's overthrow
of nature suspended
in equatorial disbelief

[magnetizical forms
latched to yin/yang]

et cetera
et cetera
etc...

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Post by e_dog » May 3rd, 2005, 11:48 pm

almost a bit too much going on to form a coherent piece, but i like that, sort of an effect of mental idea phantasmagoria itself, stream of consciousness shot through a blender --
I don't think 'Therefore, I am.' Therefore, I am.

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Post by mtmynd » May 13th, 2005, 10:50 am

thx, e_dog... this was one of dem SoC's ... from the heaving heart of heliumatic humility heated from the holiness of hubris healing holes in heavenly humus. :wink:

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