Deliverance

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saw
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Deliverance

Post by saw » August 21st, 2020, 8:31 am

there are nights when my thoughts
careen around like drunken-rubber super-balls
Hells Bells, there are plenty of days too
where notions come rapid-fire, obey no known laws

a voice inside says I need some new footwear
but I'm unimpressed with the selections
on Boot Hill, I feel bewildered like a lost ark
alone in an alley I'm very familiar with

daydreams so real, like an ancient default system
pre-wired in the womb to be uneasy,
the soul of a Greek Skeptik, the rebuilt heart
of an itchy trigger finger, the mind of a rabid rabbit

what's this ?......a new Mastercard comes in the mail
sandwiched between layers of junk mail, Wow
I must be important, They Must See !
I have what it takes to be a Master of the Universe
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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stilltrucking
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Re: Deliverance

Post by stilltrucking » August 21st, 2020, 5:55 pm

he's a fucking genius man
Post by constantine » Sun Mar 09, 2008 8:03 am

he did it once and he did it again
he's a fucking genius man
blows bubbles with chewing gum
sticks pop rocks up his ass
he's a hoot twice removed
talks jesus in esperanto
writes poetry in morse code
he's a rhombus wrapped in a trapezoid
a mentalist - a southside swami
he's got a kirlian aura
wrapped in black crushed velvet
he works the cool drive in the night shift
he's a fucking genius man

saw
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Re: Deliverance

Post by saw » August 22nd, 2020, 10:41 am

brilliant !
good ole dino
I read him all the time still
talk to his sister off and on
we became rather close after his death
when she was putting together his poetry book
a real labor of love
I had never met her when dino was alive
life can be so weird that way
dino's mom still alive living in the house
he grew up in in Greektown
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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stilltrucking
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Re: Deliverance

Post by stilltrucking » August 22nd, 2020, 11:37 am

I got that book. 8) I was thinking Deliverance was brilliant and u must b a fucking genius too, which brought Dino's poem to mind.

I grew up in the neighborhood between Greek town and Little Italy. We walked the waterfront from fells point to federal hill; but separated in time by a generation.

saw
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Re: Deliverance

Post by saw » August 23rd, 2020, 12:56 pm

wow, high praise, thanx man....to be be associated with dino in any small way is an honor
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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