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e_dog
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Post by e_dog » May 3rd, 2005, 11:03 pm

Your words are like
a pocket knife birthday gift
for a child with hidden
homicidal dreams.

Oh, but your silences,
your silences are like
a placebo dose
from the anaesthesiologist
just prior to surgery.
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Post by mtmynd » May 13th, 2005, 10:57 am

the words slice

the silence deafens

the pain of knowing
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