child of your particular universe

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saw
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child of your particular universe

Post by saw » July 20th, 2023, 6:31 am

colors that lean towards fantasy
the marriage of the mind's lines
or at least admission of an affair
with perfect curves, the distortion
of proportion

dali-effervescent
bubbles of imagination that float,
the muse dressed in scantily-clad
nothingness, shimmers in everything you see....
behold the wonder of art

where did she come from ?
this etch-a-sketch revelation
her canvas expression alien and surprising
as if she were born to you alone
a child of your particular universe

I sit in my studio anxious to meet her
the death of empathy is the birth of barbarism

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Re: child of your particular universe

Post by judih » July 20th, 2023, 8:38 am

your words add to my own ability to see

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Re: child of your particular universe

Post by saw » July 20th, 2023, 9:19 am

thanx judih.......glad I am communicating in some way.... 8)
the death of empathy is the birth of barbarism

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