Blanket Statement

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mtmynd
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Blanket Statement

Post by mtmynd » June 9th, 2005, 10:52 am

Blanket Statement

you jolt me
you bolt me
you dont'
revolt me

patter-pit-pat-pat
you is where it's at,
you and your smile -
i listen to it
as i look into those
baby greens
holding the answer
to another night
on the high horse
along fantasy's path

i wonder thru
possibilities
unfolding like
blankets on the beach
watching the sunset -
eastern love, baby

why be a lone thread
when i can be woven
into your life?


cecil

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Post by hester_prynne » June 9th, 2005, 5:08 pm

Man, Cec.
This just flows so good, and it lands, gracefully, in an utterly tender oasis.
Beautiful.

H 8)

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Post by mtmynd » June 10th, 2005, 9:59 am

thx, Hes'... kind words from a kind woman... always good to hear.

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Post by mousey1 » June 13th, 2005, 12:34 pm

I love this poem..

I can see you had fun with it...

It's funny, sweet and cleverly clever....a nice combo

This poem blankets me with warmth.


Thanks for the smile.

I would like to be woven into someones blanket! Tightly woven!
I used to walk with my head in the clouds but I kept getting struck by lightning!
Now my head twitches and I drool alot. Anonymouse

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