feed

[4°]

make myself at home
in the warmth of your throat
internalize while outing
discomfort melts into nothing
only relief is left
as you feed on me
my need
you meet
complete and complacent
my will alligned with
the god of my
misunderstanding
the fact understated
this thing,
underrated
belief and reality
positively charged
this is my body
remember me by doing this
as if i'd give you time
to forget
swallow hard and eat my
bad attitude
free flowing essence
that becomes something else
as our exchange is made
i'll nourish your bad dog baby
until you become me.

[hester_prynne]

"as you feed on me, my need you meet"

deeply undeep.
another alarmingly accepted American dream?

very depressing poem.
well done.......

H

[creativesoul]

i have been in relationships with people like this
and it is really not very satisfying
the best i can offer is thank you for your honesty

[4°]

i feel as though my words are misconstrued.

here is the original of my poem.
the illustration may make it clearer.

[Dixie]

pretty cool piece