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Arcadia
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wind

Post by Arcadia » October 16th, 2005, 1:21 pm

water
fire
earth

where is my mother
where are my sons and daughters
today?

too much wind
too much water
too much sun-day cloudy sun-day

you tell me
about mountains and valleys
and I can´t feel them
big plains
and nothing to hold on to

wind
water
fire
earth

four
turn

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Post by mtmynd » October 16th, 2005, 2:15 pm

Very nice, Arcadia... muy nice. Me gusta.

Gracias!

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Post by Doreen Peri » October 16th, 2005, 4:55 pm

the elements
cause my blood
to pump

thank you for this, arcadia

enjoyed much!

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Post by Dixie » October 16th, 2005, 6:28 pm

having lived by the beach all my life, I've been wanting to go to the mountains for awhile

good write here, made me long for at least thinking about moving

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Post by judih » October 17th, 2005, 12:04 am

like a lone flute in the wind

very simple, haunting, arcadia

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Post by Arcadia » October 17th, 2005, 1:10 pm

mother´s day crisis and I Ching. I felt specially alien yesterday.
thanks for reading!,

Arcadia

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