Gardel singing on tv
about silent nights
a war
(somewhere)
and that everything is calm
(somewhere)
four medals without owners
& ambition´s resting
lapislázuli, gold, pigments,water & eggs
a diptic shining at candlelight
highlighting with precition
density of jazmins
a poster and a Lennon´s song
seventy´s ornaments
mixing in the box with new ones
(I broke one yesterday, but there are more)
a baby just born
passing through multiple arms
warm & sweaty
red skin & swollen eyes
boxing to the air
so beautiful and concentrated
in only shout & suck
lots of words
that maybe are ours.
Gardel cantando en televisión
sobre noches silenciosas
una guerra
(en algún lado)
y que todo está en calma
(en algún lado)
cuatro medallas sin propietarios
y la ambición descansando
lapislázuli, oro, pigmentos, agua y huevos
un díptico brillando a la luz de las velas
resaltando con precisión
densidad de jazmines
un poster y una canción de Lennon
adornos de los setenta
mezclados en la caja con otros nuevos
(rompí uno ayer, pero hay más)
una bebé recién nacida
pasando por múltiples brazos
tibia y transpirada
piel roja y ojos hinchados
boxeando con el aire
tan hermosa y concentrada
en solamente gritar y succionar
montones de palabras
que quizás son nuestras.
diciembre
Post your poetry, any style.
- tinkerjack
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Post by tinkerjack » December 14th, 2005, 11:17 pm
lots of words
that maybe are ours.

thanks, no words to express how much I like your poem
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