Help me! mid-winter haiku

Post by **judih** » January 13th, 2006, 3:28 am

icy fingertips
tip of nose stays cold
mid-winter moment

Post by **panta rhei** » January 13th, 2006, 3:56 am

white frosted meadows
frozen sunlight in the eyes
of a warm-winged crow

Post by **judih** » January 13th, 2006, 4:09 am

dishes washed
music on
dust of winter sings

Post by **firsty** » January 13th, 2006, 10:34 am

warm
fog
rain
unwinter january
contrails looming heavy
slip the road slap the ground and flip the page
somebody
gimme
a flake

Post by **panta rhei** » January 13th, 2006, 11:27 am

dust dozes in winter dunes
sound hovers through pale blue cold

please, someone gimme alpine gold
to toss into the tune

Post by **judih** » January 13th, 2006, 11:30 am

all outa gold
but got some mean spit
wet and windy comin up

Post by **panta rhei** » January 13th, 2006, 11:43 am

spit spat out
smears golden bib - bah!
and clears throat

Post by **judih** » January 13th, 2006, 11:53 am

mid-winter evening
poetry to be screamed in fire
throat on strike

phoenix out to lunch
sandstorms swirling elsewhere
voice lost in bed

Post by **panta rhei** » January 13th, 2006, 12:20 pm

throat full of ashes
phoenix don't rise no more
i need to cough

Post by **judih** » January 13th, 2006, 2:21 pm

20:21
time to set off for smoke-filled minds
set the phoenix loose

Post by **panta rhei** » January 13th, 2006, 4:57 pm

phoenix flies free
rises through smoke
leaves ashes behind

Post by **panta rhei** » January 13th, 2006, 4:57 pm

ooops, edit - doble post due to clickfingerslip....

Post by **judih** » January 13th, 2006, 5:36 pm

phoenix has landed
she flew, she brew, she's consumed
out of ashes, life

Post by **panta rhei** » January 13th, 2006, 6:00 pm

filled and satisfied
phoenix sleeps in veins
it's time to rest

Post by **Artguy** » January 14th, 2006, 12:39 pm

Tropical T dot
Spring in January
Can't complain