7.20.06

Clarity.
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Shem
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7.20.06

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blooming in sprigtime
dropping off in autumn
what else?
Leave the letter that never begins to go find the latter that ever comes to end, written in smoke and blurred by mist and signed of solitude, sealed of night.
-James Joyce
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Would I be out of line to say that true haiku is five, seven, five syllables? Originally involving nature but necessarily so anymore. Does forum etiquette on this board permit this or am I too stiff? Just let me know.

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None of us ever gets anything we don't either need or deserve. Dry those liquid emotions and move on.
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any thing goes
moderator on this board
she don't stop here anymore.

if it feels good
do it
call it Haiku
blooming in sprigtime
dropping off in autumn
what else?
Winter and Summer
"If that's all there is my friends,
then let's keep dancing"
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