Poetry manuscript

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Doreen Peri
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Poetry manuscript

Post by Doreen Peri » December 20th, 2006, 2:18 pm

I edited my poetry manuscript.
I deleted all of the worthless lines.
If you'd like to read it, here it is.

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Post by stilltrucking » December 20th, 2006, 2:44 pm

My epoch novel.

Totenkopf

Post by Totenkopf » December 21st, 2006, 11:42 am

I find it rather ____________; and the sections following ____________ are especially ________________. The lines _____________, which seem to indicate a sensation of _________________ perhaps allude to _____________ and the related __________________ of ___________. All in all, the poem is ____________________.

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Post by mnaz » February 8th, 2007, 2:20 pm

You need a new editor..

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