In exchange for love.

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hester_prynne
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In exchange for love.

Post by hester_prynne » February 19th, 2007, 6:23 am

Lady unloveable
makes her appearance.
A childlike,
demure,
well-meaning woman.
Compelled to give
anything,
in exchange
for love.

Babygirl waits,
in car for mommy.
She's in the tavern,
drinking, dancing.
Sneaking out barsnacks
every half hour,
dotingly given,
in exchange for love.
"I am a victim of society, and, an entertainer"........DW

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Post by stilltrucking » February 19th, 2007, 6:38 am

the rate of exchange (where did I just read that)

I mean besides your poem.

Money never could buy me love

Some women never have sugar daddies
They don't even have fathers

my rate of exchange with my baby sister is
kindness for kindness
laugh for laugh
love for love

loved your poem hester
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