Surreal-ku

[e_dog]

(after Kerouac, with apologies)

Your pussy
was wet
from walking in the rain.

[stilltrucking]

I liked it but I don't get the allusion to Kerouac.



Clear skies and sunshine
Hiroshima walkers
Now shadows

a surreal peanut ku
you just can't eat one

[e_dog]

he wrote a -ku something like:

the soles of my shoes
are wet
from walking in the rain.

[stilltrucking]

Kerouac
breaks my heart