My Plea

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Cher
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My Plea

Post by Cher » May 11th, 2011, 7:37 am

lift me up and take me
hold me in your embrace
feed my soul clear my mind
let me see my love's true face

give me knowledge, give me strength
countenance to see
clarity and understanding
make that my blessings be

I allow no one to define me
my spirit guides within
your energy I savor
the earth, the seas, the wind

we need to be more cognizant
of life, of love, of peace
respect our earth, our fellow man
if not, it all will cease

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dadio
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Re: My Plea

Post by dadio » May 13th, 2011, 7:16 am

like the poem & theme, Cher.

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Cher
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Re: My Plea

Post by Cher » May 13th, 2011, 7:26 am

Thanks for reading

Have a great day!

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Re: My Plea

Post by saw » May 13th, 2011, 8:35 am

some fine thoughts in this Cher...the rhyme and the meter are spot on....do you sing as well ?
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Cher
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Re: My Plea

Post by Cher » May 13th, 2011, 8:40 am

LOL....SING!!!! In my head maybe as the bathroom has kicked me out...water stops running when I start cat-a-wowling (smile)

Thanks for the sentiment Saw....it brought a smile to my face...and geez.. I finally got the meter right..yea...

have a wonderful day..

Cher

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