the knots in healing

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saw
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the knots in healing

Post by saw » September 9th, 2011, 2:14 pm

If I could loosen all these knots
I'd pull myself through the loop
get free, fly away like a newborn hawk
chasing a bird of paradise, I'd leave
these see-through ropes coiled
in the vacant air, in the dust
of what cannot be undone, I'd
pat myself on the back, say
there there now, I forgive you
and I would learn the art
of forgetting, how to become
someone new, here in my
self-imposed
witness protection program
if only I could loosen all these knots
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: the knots in healing

Post by creativesoul » September 9th, 2011, 7:53 pm

Can so relate! Rock on! The many facets of poetry- tell stories of the heart! Kindness- sweet!
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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dadio
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Re: the knots in healing

Post by dadio » September 10th, 2011, 2:23 am

Excellent poem. 8)

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