we burned

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the mingo
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we burned

Post by the mingo » September 30th, 2014, 11:40 pm

we burned
through the days
& the ash of them
rose up
to be carried away
by the wind
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: we burned

Post by WIREMAN » October 1st, 2014, 5:53 pm

we jammed through
the night
and the stickyness
of it, was devine

this poem u wrote is awesome mingo .....
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....

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Re: we burned

Post by judih » October 1st, 2014, 10:53 pm

the mingo wrote:we burned
through the days
& the ash of them
rose up
to be carried away
by the wind
sounds like a gravestone epitaph for a group of action poets
perhaps we can all take a chunk of this

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Re: we burned

Post by the mingo » October 2nd, 2014, 9:53 am

thx folks - 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: we burned

Post by mtmynd » October 3rd, 2014, 6:53 pm

el mingo, amigo... this is all needs to be said... and you did it perfectly.
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Re: we burned

Post by Arcadia » October 4th, 2014, 5:51 pm

yeah, ashes to the wind...! :) (it sounds ecological if it´s not doing en masse... :lol: ). Gracias, mingo!

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Re: we burned

Post by the mingo » October 4th, 2014, 9:20 pm

Thx Cec & Veronica - 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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