we burned
through the days
& the ash of them
rose up
to be carried away
by the wind
we burned
Re: we burned
we jammed through
the night
and the stickyness
of it, was devine
this poem u wrote is awesome mingo .....
the night
and the stickyness
of it, was devine
this poem u wrote is awesome mingo .....
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....
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Re: we burned
sounds like a gravestone epitaph for a group of action poetsthe mingo wrote:we burned
through the days
& the ash of them
rose up
to be carried away
by the wind
perhaps we can all take a chunk of this
Re: we burned
el mingo, amigo... this is all needs to be said... and you did it perfectly.
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Re: we burned
yeah, ashes to the wind...!
(it sounds ecological if it´s not doing en masse...
). Gracias, mingo!


Re: we burned
Thx Cec & Veronica - 

Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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