longer & deeper

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the mingo
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longer & deeper

Post by the mingo » March 18th, 2015, 5:08 pm

i can no longer imagine
the distance between now
& then
at this elevation snow stays
longer & deeper on the fields
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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68degrees
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Re: longer & deeper

Post by 68degrees » March 18th, 2015, 9:48 pm

With height comes great responsibility. And a longer tolerance to snow.

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Re: longer & deeper

Post by wylde » March 19th, 2015, 8:33 am

the difference, or perhaps even distance, between "there" and "here"

[which is a question of being "here now" as opposed to "there and "then']

is simply a "t"?

riteon. enjoyed the read.
.homesick. but homeless.
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Re: longer & deeper

Post by the mingo » March 19th, 2015, 8:48 am

yeah, a single letter - power of symbols - 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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Re: longer & deeper

Post by saw » March 19th, 2015, 11:27 am

frozen time, buried on the field of dreams
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading
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