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Perfection

Post by sooZen » August 14th, 2005, 8:44 am

Now that is just perfect
said and not meant
Truth has a way of shining
darkness dispelled
No one has a bounty of perfection
a rearview of perception
Mistakes are made as lessons
the only mistake is repeated
over and over again
make new mistakes today
learn from them
perfection is not perfect

Peace,
SooZen
Freedom's just another word...



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Post by stilltrucking » August 14th, 2005, 10:23 am

Perfect :!:

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Post by sooZen » August 21st, 2005, 7:45 am

buzzard brief:

i admit it
this full moon mood and roller coaster lifestyle
everything is just perfect except...
picking your scabs, your deep wounds
bare, naked
we sit on the deck after such a day
one to remember
yet...I pick
why? I see a half-healed man
enlightened and dumb
and like the dark winged buzzards that circle in the valley
i look for your open sore, i rent, i tear, i stab, i prick
i pick at the fleshy lobes of your walled enclosures
sometimes you are more minded than empty
sometimes I am more bitch than buddha
we meld our wounds searching for panacea
HEAL!, i plead but there is no healing for i am no savior
just a carnivore looking for a likely meal
i pick you.
Freedom's just another word...



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Post by Axanderdeath » August 21st, 2005, 12:14 pm

yes very zen
but everything is like that
and what about getting in to the middle
letys not harp on extrems
thus spoke G.A.P.

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Post by Artguy » August 21st, 2005, 2:37 pm

I am you are we are all the perfect Buddha...........Just as we are we only need know our minds as it really is...

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Post by mnaz » August 22nd, 2005, 2:15 pm

"just a carnivore looking for a likely meal. i pick you"....

hehehehe..... I like it...

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Post by rhino » August 23rd, 2005, 2:05 am

a view to a rear

a rearview

polished and clear?

never, not even in hindsight

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Post by mousey1 » August 23rd, 2005, 2:37 pm

BB....buzzard brief is beautifully brilliant...I love it!!!

It was a likely meal but methinks you didn't enjoy it. I say if we can't pick our loved ones bones whose bones can we pick. :roll:

A rotting corpse lying in the sun
is what I have become
No one cares
to pick my bones
So I rot and fester
And die alone
(morbidity...thy name is mousey!LOL :lol: )


Thanks for the read BB, very good!!!!
I used to walk with my head in the clouds but I kept getting struck by lightning!
Now my head twitches and I drool alot. Anonymouse

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Post by jimboloco » August 24th, 2005, 12:12 pm

mousey
you wowsey me
somewhere under the great big sky
my bones are waiting for their day
in the sun
and i take your cybernetic vibrations
that oozed into me
boney mineral matrices
someday
only a sediment
mixed into dust
starlight
faint reflections
sadness and mirth
[color=darkcyan]i'm on a survival mission
yo ho ho an a bottle of rum om[/color]

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