Realization

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Artguy
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Realization

Post by Artguy » January 8th, 2007, 9:13 pm

Tibetan monks
Chanting open mystic mantra
Over blue trane realization
His golden sax blowing from deepest depth
Himself with lidded eyes

Notes drifting off, mantra too
Into the ether both in harmony
Incensed air thick in shrouded shrine
Saffron robes softly sitting
Bowls and bells ring

Emptiness in the open palm
The impermanent original mind
Gives nonattainment joy
Floating lotus flower opens
Svaha!!!

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Post by mtmynd » January 9th, 2007, 12:12 pm

coltraned eyes upon nonattainment
jazz mantra dissolving mind
incense flowing from the stick

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Re: Realization

Post by Axanderdeath » January 9th, 2007, 7:45 pm

Artguy wrote:Tibetan monks
Chanting open mystic mantra
Over blue trane realization
His golden sax blowing from deepest depth
Himself with Incensed air

Notes drifting off, mantra too
Into the ether both in harmony
Incensed air thick in shrouded shrine
Saffron robes softly sitting
Bowls and bells ring

Emptiness in the open palm
The impermanent original mind
Gives nonattainment joy
Floating lotus flower opens
Svaha!!!
i liked the use of "Incensed air " and "Incensed air "--happy thoughts I had when reading this in darkness of room with gleamed vision of computer screen...
thus spoke G.A.P.

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