skipping stones - kinda tanka

Post by **jweeble** » May 1st, 2008, 12:09 am

rings skimming surface
intersecting moving on
infinite travels
perpetual connections
effects forever unknown

glancing encounters
looks, words serendipitous
unseen, unnoticed
spread as ripples on water
changing lives, decisions, me

Post by **westcoast** » May 1st, 2008, 12:12 am

very nice thoughts jw

Post by **jweeble** » May 1st, 2008, 12:19 am

ty - sometimes when the mind is flying off in all directions, the simplicity of this format helps pull all together...

Post by **jimboloco** » May 4th, 2008, 12:45 pm

five line haiku
what ya gonna do

sunday morning buzzed

rings skimming surface
spread as ripples on water
glancing encounters