skipping stones - kinda tanka

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skipping stones - kinda tanka

Post by jweeble » May 1st, 2008, 12:09 am

rings skimming surface
intersecting moving on
infinite travels
perpetual connections
effects forever unknown

glancing encounters
looks, words serendipitous
unseen, unnoticed
spread as ripples on water
changing lives, decisions, me
immeasurable...illogical...infinity squared
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Post by westcoast » May 1st, 2008, 12:12 am

very nice thoughts jw :)
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Post by jweeble » May 1st, 2008, 12:19 am

ty - sometimes when the mind is flying off in all directions, the simplicity of this format helps pull all together...
immeasurable...illogical...infinity squared
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Post by jimboloco » May 4th, 2008, 12:45 pm

five line haiku
what ya gonna do :?:
sunday morning buzzed :o

rings skimming surface
spread as ripples on water
glancing encounters
[color=darkcyan]i'm on a survival mission
yo ho ho an a bottle of rum om[/color]
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