poor yorick

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WIREMAN
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poor yorick

Post by WIREMAN » June 29th, 2008, 7:03 pm

comes a time
when you gotta
creep into the
deepest recesses
of the unknown
no apologies are
necessary where
you never can win
this you
this me
all this
o say can't you see?
more than is dreamed
in your philosophies
alas poor yorick
i knew him well
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....

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Post by saw » June 30th, 2008, 6:08 am

As the great philosopher, Donovan said, "Quite right slick"....no need
to apologize.....we go where we are needed.....
the death of empathy is the birth of barbarism

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Post by constantine » July 2nd, 2008, 9:22 am

i like the gravity of this tight poem. it's less lyrical than some of your work that i'm familiar with; it has the same edge , but is more serious. i always enjoy your work..

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Post by WIREMAN » July 2nd, 2008, 4:04 pm

sometimes willie shakes inside my shining sea....thanks for the great responses steve and dino............
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....

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