poor yorick

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WIREMAN
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poor yorick

Post by WIREMAN » June 29th, 2008, 7:03 pm

comes a time
when you gotta
creep into the
deepest recesses
of the unknown
no apologies are
necessary where
you never can win
this you
this me
all this
o say can't you see?
more than is dreamed
in your philosophies
alas poor yorick
i knew him well
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....

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Post by saw » June 30th, 2008, 6:08 am

As the great philosopher, Donovan said, "Quite right slick"....no need
to apologize.....we go where we are needed.....
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Post by constantine » July 2nd, 2008, 9:22 am

i like the gravity of this tight poem. it's less lyrical than some of your work that i'm familiar with; it has the same edge , but is more serious. i always enjoy your work..

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Post by WIREMAN » July 2nd, 2008, 4:04 pm

sometimes willie shakes inside my shining sea....thanks for the great responses steve and dino............
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....

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