drag strip

[constantine]

what do you think?

[Lightning Rod]

I still miss the bag
there is a bag in drag racing, holds the parachute
and there is a bag in huffing
(plus it rhymes with drag)

I'm not trying to write your poem here, dino
you are quite capable of writing your own (and good ones)
I was just trying to convey to you what my thoughts were on how the piece changed
it's clear that you put more thought into your pieces than many do

[constantine]

well, thanks. i kind of like it. thanks for the help, seriously.

[Lightning Rod]

you certainly don't need any help as a poet, dino

I kind of like it too
but I really liked it before

things change as they grow

I can't count the times I've told doreen
"sign it"
when she is doing a painting
and then she adds another layer

[constantine]

they are living things. i come back to them - incidentally or intentionally. they are potentially never finished until the final check out. it's good to see things through different eyes. mine and others.

changed whiff to huff.