Carving

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the mingo
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Carving

Post by the mingo » July 30th, 2008, 9:05 am

carving words
into the ground
into the bark
into the rain
into the milk
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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Post by SmileGRL » July 30th, 2008, 10:37 am

like cereal drifting in a pool of milk
like a stick trailing over sand
like raindrops on a window pane
like leaves falling in my hand
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Post by Odette » July 30th, 2008, 10:37 am

Indelible brevities. Très bon.
Art cannot be modern.. Art is primordially eternal.
– Egon Schiele
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Post by the mingo » July 30th, 2008, 12:52 pm

SmileGRL - my hand holds as many chestnuts the time called years I've spent in this land - thx for reading & responding (kiss)

Odette - Your English is better than mine, I had to look the word "indelible" up. I thought I knew what it meant and I did, kind of, but there are many more shades to it than what I knew. thx for reading & responding. (kiss for you too)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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