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Lao C Ryter
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Last edited by Lao C Ryter on February 23rd, 2011, 5:27 pm, edited 2 times in total.
if words could mend the holes in my quilt
night would be lost for my shiver.
-FIN
night would be lost for my shiver.
-FIN
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judih
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Re: A Mary Stroll
strange cocoon at the side of the road
wrapped in delight
propelled by curiousity
one can only wonder
wrapped in delight
propelled by curiousity
one can only wonder
Re: A Mary Stroll
Neatly wrapped tale. Knitted well.
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happytrails
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Re: A Mary Stroll
I like this poem. The whole feel of the shared experience. I can relate to it. Although we had water and carrot sticks (and a couple of apples) Still I can relate.
I also liked Judih's response. Nicely done, Judih.
I also liked Judih's response. Nicely done, Judih.
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weepingwillow
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Re: A Mary Stroll
A three mile hump
Winding round creeks of coal
She examines his beauty
While aspiring to be
A fifth the poet he is
Hazed appreciations
Slightly drunken conversations
Reality swimming through our thoughts
Instead we will discuss tying knots
Winding round creeks of coal
She examines his beauty
While aspiring to be
A fifth the poet he is
Hazed appreciations
Slightly drunken conversations
Reality swimming through our thoughts
Instead we will discuss tying knots
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Lao C Ryter
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Re: A Mary Stroll
TY judih, provoking response.
TY dadio, inspiring response.
TY happytrails, wholesome and inspiring I found your response.
TY weepingwillow, I like the way you captured the spirit.
TY dadio, inspiring response.
TY happytrails, wholesome and inspiring I found your response.
TY weepingwillow, I like the way you captured the spirit.
if words could mend the holes in my quilt
night would be lost for my shiver.
-FIN
night would be lost for my shiver.
-FIN
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