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joel
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bitch.

Post by joel » June 2nd, 2011, 3:47 pm

You plait my guts like schoolgirls braid their hair—
with giggles, grins and gossip— while you’re sure
I’ll praise your giving talent, unaware
each moment is a hell that I endure
unwillingly and based upon a pure
and simple inability to snap
my fingers, flee or find another cure
for my impatience, lest I slip and slap
you silly, till you’re bruised— till all your crap
is dropped, exposed and silenced. You’re a bitch—
but no one’s ever gonna say it. Grapple
with truth of who you are and ditch
the false impression that you beautify
the world. You don’t— to think you do’s a lie.
"Every genuinely religious person is a heretic, and therefore a revolutionary" -- GBShaw

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Re: bitch.

Post by emel.scott » June 2nd, 2011, 10:13 pm

Sonnets are tough, nice effort here.
We should not mind if on our ear there fell. Some less of cunning, more of oracle...Thoreau

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Re: bitch.

Post by dadio » June 4th, 2011, 7:26 am

gifted poet brings another gem.

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Re: bitch.

Post by ButterflyKiss » June 7th, 2011, 11:55 am

I love this, Joel!
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