not playing pool

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saw
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not playing pool

Post by saw » August 21st, 2014, 3:42 pm

I have been thoroughly trained
to be productive
it was beat into to me as a little boy

to work mindlessly on this-that or the other,
to volunteer for overtime, to dust
the tables with lemon pledge, mow the grass

dig the road dirt from the treads
of the tires on my pick-up truck,
on my knees with a toothbrush

I was lectured, leisure time would leave me
behind the 8 ball in the game of success,
but I wasn't a pool player

so I ignored the reference
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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whoaisme
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Re: not playing pool

Post by whoaisme » August 21st, 2014, 6:57 pm

do nothing
and leave nothing
undone!

8)
"From the sudden invasion of a mind not my own in the world. This I will record. For whom? For m y s e l f, beyond denial and beyond indifference." - Philip Lamantia

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the mingo
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Re: not playing pool

Post by the mingo » August 22nd, 2014, 9:01 am

hell yeah, Mongolia, all over everything 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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mnaz
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Re: not playing pool

Post by mnaz » August 22nd, 2014, 11:33 am

pretty much.

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Re: not playing pool

Post by dadio » August 23rd, 2014, 4:06 am

Bukowski & I dig this poem.

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Re: not playing pool

Post by Cenacle » August 26th, 2014, 10:54 am

funny poem - so much of what we become is how we were raised - before we know how to discriminate the world for ourselves . . .

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Re: not playing pool

Post by saw » August 26th, 2014, 12:23 pm

thanx for the feedback friends...appreciated
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: not playing pool

Post by mnaz » August 26th, 2014, 4:49 pm

Leisure time is sorely underrated.

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