the irrelevance of age

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saw
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the irrelevance of age

Post by saw » April 12th, 2015, 1:41 pm

malbec eyes sparkle
in the dim amber of the kitchen table lamp
creamy bare shoulders glow like a new planet
til my mind bends like one of uri geller's spoons

I can feel the cells in my body melting
like an abandoned ice cream cone, my
brain feels like an unsolved rubik's cube
my color, my shape, morphed by her conversation

the furnace is fueled by the newness
of unknown quantities, the kettle on the stove
shrieks like a lunar wolf, the steam is
fog machined ambiance for nina simone's truth

whispering from the compact player atop the refrigerator
damn, man...it's just a shared late night cup of tea
just two old retired warriors that have recycled their coats of armor,
just two veterans of the bloody relationship war of the last century

about to choose an herbal tea,
from a handmade carousel of peppermint, vanilla almond
mandarin orange, licorice, blueberry
boxes that promise vitality, better sleep, endurance

we spin the lazy susan like a new age roulette wheel,
we laugh at the bold promises made on artsy cardboard structures
honey ?...I ask
how 'bout a little sugar
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: the irrelevance of age

Post by WIREMAN » April 12th, 2015, 2:14 pm

music to my wired ears...there b a couple a u guys make this place shine 8)
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....

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Re: the irrelevance of age

Post by mnaz » April 13th, 2015, 7:08 am

See, that's the thing.
How old is anything?

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Re: the irrelevance of age

Post by saw » April 13th, 2015, 7:10 am

hey mark, glad it spoke to you....thanx for the feedback...have a wired week !....I have a carpentry gig in walking distance this week....trips back to the garage will take a minute... :D
it's spring in mary land....yankees comin' to B'mo tonight to get their asses whooooped...life is good
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: the irrelevance of age

Post by judih » April 13th, 2015, 10:44 pm

candle-lit old time beat
love this, steve

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Re: the irrelevance of age

Post by Doreen Peri » April 14th, 2015, 12:09 am

terrific piece... enjoyed it very much!

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Re: the irrelevance of age

Post by saw » April 14th, 2015, 6:58 am

thanx mark, mnaz, judih, doreen...always love to hear from you guys
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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